Correct Me…. So I can Reciprocate

Correct Me…. So I can Reciprocate     by RajaKrishnan

Your desire to reciprocate
Reveals values and principles
That parent’s alone inculcate
         Care not, for idle rebuke
         Fret not, on failed attempt
         Ponder on the point you missed
Mistakes teach values too
Evading them is, not to try
Victory eludes, when we fail to try

4 Replies to “Correct Me…. So I can Reciprocate”

  1. I like this so much, I’m speechless, which is hard to do, because I usually have a lot to say…. but I am speechless. 5 stars!!

  2. this one was too good Deepa … I hardly follow the backlinks … but I did this time and mam if I can say this u were brilliant … absolutely ..

    I immensely enjoyed flutter,merge and dreams as well ….

    Alok

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