5 Replies to “Just a Bud”

  1. marvelous it is to sight
    and picture faints all a sense.
    What meets in the intenser day,
    like some shelly’s verse,
    is the intecity of the scheme.
    what leads to profound comparison
    is what the sense sees.

  2. Well thought out words vishesh..
    you may beed to pay some attention to the rhyming (eihter at beggining or the end) of the lines..this will put your words into more swaying feel

  3. ha,the rhyme never seems to get me on the full….but i felt a little strange without writing poetry tried to not write in my blog atleast but back to writing poetry…its my first love..:)

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